where once was forever (Edder&snow)

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Snow

Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 1170
desert flower looking for rain

0 posted 2004-03-02 10:35 PM

an Edder/Snow duet

where once was forever

there's a promise
beneath the moon
found at the altar
in your eyes
there
hope stirs
in restless sleep
and alone falls
to dreams of you

what once was
forever is...
tender whispers

grace-

memories

scattered on
pebbled pathways
and the ink of tears
drying
upon skin turned ash
in the fires
of your stare
bittersweet love
...an imprint
on a pillow, named
for you

©Ed&Snow

"yet each man kills the thing he loves
by each let this be heard,
some do it with a bitter look,
some with a flattering word"
oscar wilde

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

1 posted 2004-03-03 07:17 AM

I knew this was going to be good when I saw the names. *S* Your words are woven well in this forlorn beauty... great job!

Kicking Kim
Member

since 2001-04-16

Posts 426
Cloud Cucko Land!

2 posted 2004-03-03 08:18 AM

"and the ink of tears
drying"

It does seem as though tears stain, and smiles wash out!! Everyone notices the tracks of tears but nobody can tell if you've just been smiling! hehe

Wonderful poem!

^*Kimberley*^

"Theres no posession, just obsession and growing depression"

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

3 posted 2004-03-03 09:57 AM

"hope stirs
in restless sleep
and alone falls
to dreams of you"

Very well done. Those lines are my favorite.

"sit on top of the world and tell me how you feel...'cause what you feel is what I feel for you.."
~Dido~

Sudhir Iyer
Member Ascendant

since 2000-04-26

Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium

4 posted 2004-03-03 10:01 AM

nicely penned, you two...

regards
sudhir

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

5 posted 2004-03-03 02:48 PM

LadySnow and Ed~
This is sheer beauty in it's entirety~

'there's a promise
beneath the moon
found at the altar
in your eyes'

... and this just wormed it's way right into my heart~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

noles1@totcon.com

muted

Member Elite

since 2004-01-15

Posts 2949
Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving

6 posted 2004-03-03 08:21 PM

Snow, Ed told me he was having trouble with his muse, I think he was wrong! You two really do make a fantastic duet....the flow, the emotion, imagery.....bravo!!

Hope to see more of Ed, and certainly always looking forward to your writings snow (especially the ones you read out for us)

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