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Love and the Frog
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Love and the Frog |
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Poet deVine
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since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
The frog whispered to the toad Don’t eat that fly over there Why not asked the leery toad There are enough to spare! That fly is very special to me It carries a message to my love It will land and tell her She’s the one I’m thinking of They watched the fly hover Over the pond to the south It flew near his lady’s lilypad And she sucked it into her mouth There is a moral here somewhere As the frog learned that fateful day If you’ve got a feeling that’s true It’s something you alone should say! |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Poet -- Very novel, and very cute! Smiling at this! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Ah Sharon..this is SO cute! Thanks for the smiles this morning. Hugs~Nancy
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
(chuckling) nicely illustrated... no fly by night advice here..  |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
great pic - wonderful poem - great message and cute and loved it - Paul |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Thank you all..this was one of those moments when you wonder WHY did I write this? LOL |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Wit sometimes delivers the message of the moral better than any other way...Your poem contains both, good job enjoyed __________ice ><> |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
This is wonderful dear gal.....I love poems about LongJohn and Balladeer anyhow, but this one was quite entertaining with a good message... |
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Kicking Kim Member
since 2001-04-16
Posts 426Cloud Cucko Land! |
What a lovely little poem. However humble and sweet it may be, it has a clean cut message!! Wonderful!!  ^*Kimberley*^ "Theres no posession, just obsession and growing depression" |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
*chuckle* shaking my head we've gotta talk, lady.  |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
nicely done... regards sudhir |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
I relate with the fly. _Juju |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Smiling here Sharon, really cute indeed.  M Beauty of the world which is soon to perish has two edges, one of laughter and one of anguish, cutting the heart asunder. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
LOL, I knew I'd love this write. SLURPED it right up with a grin! |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Awww....I love this Sharon. Maybe the lady frog heard his romantic words and just had to swallow them up so that no other frog of the female gender could claim them?!! hugs, Chris |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Very cute, Sharon, and much enjoyed! |
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