Open Poetry #31 |
A Time For Reflection |
Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Upon the veranda I sit quietly In the hours just past dawn I find peace amongst the quiet It is the best part of the morn I am enveloped in tranquility As I gaze out towards the sea I am at one with my thoughts Here my spirit feels so free I find so much inspiration Which encourages me to write I take photographs at sunset As the day turns into night As the light of day is fading And I look out across the sea I allow thoughts of my father To come sailing home to me I am in motion |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
perfect subject matter for perfect reflections...well written...enjoyed |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sue~ As tender and gently lovely as it gets~ 'enveloped in tranquility' LOVE THAT THOUGHT~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Ravenwolfvoyager Member
since 2003-12-25
Posts 326 |
That is a touching write Sue. A soul on the sea in deliverance of a hearts island. As always you astound me with your warm writes and serene images. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Sue, this is just lovely. I also sit quietly and let fond memories wrap around my mind. hugs, Chris "At one glance |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Beautiful, Sue! |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big angel hugs) Oh Sue, your wonderful poems for your father never fail to make me cry, sweet friend, your love for your father is so deep and infinite just as I know his love was for you and you truly have pieces of his heart and smile! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, he will always love you, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Light and loving... Grover. |
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J.Samm Member
since 2004-01-12
Posts 415Iloilo City, Philippines |
"I allow thoughts of my father To come sailing home to me" ... you're such a sweet daughter, i loved the way you wote this part |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...sometimes I wake up in the middle of the night with a line or two...and I have to write it down before I can go back to sleep...James |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Very, very nice. Joyce |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Sue: Beautiful and nostalgic! Love Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
beautiful, as always...reminds me of those hours I spend now and then |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Sue This is such a nice poem...love it.....:-) Often I think of my father, at sunset....like just last night, I saw him at dusk in the dieing light..he was in a red cardinal suit, sitting in a plumtree...sorry if I seem delusional, but he still is that vivid in my memory. Thank you for this beautiful poem ______ice ><> |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Hi Sue ... love your new picture! Bright and early morn is my favorite time of the day also. Most of the world is still sleeping and it's a good time to think, to pray and to write. I enjoyed this so much. Hugs to you my friend, Marti I take no credit for my poems. Although I write them, I feel |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
We all need times of reflecting.... beautiful as always Sue... Love and hugs ~ARH Open your eyes, open your mind, open your heart, let me come in and show you love.....~ARH |
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