Open Poetry #31 |
Wings of Words |
Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Wings of Words When you ride the wings of words You glide the sky like swings of birds. And they’re below the fields of green And all the other in-between You light the candles of your perch At times a feeling that of church Take a voyage of declare On the waters that you share You ride the mist of emerald Isles Raining tears or those of smiles You cross the mot of Builders Bridge Upon an act of privilege Whatever message of intend You take the passage to its end And add it to your daily fair A marker and a place to share It is the ghost of magic’s host It is a drink, a wine of toast. |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Oh wow...I think this is my favorite of yours! Well done! And good morning! "sit on top of the world and tell me how you feel...'cause what you feel is what I feel for you.." |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"Whatever message of intend You take the passage to its end And add it to your daily fair A marker and a place to share It is the ghost of magic’s host It is a drink, a wine of toast" Wonderful morning read Sy... So good to read you each and every morning.. I don't know how you do it..must be magic! ~Morning hugs & tea, Nancy~ In the midst of winter.. |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Cheers, my good fellow! -MVS You CAN make a difference: |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
And you have mastered the words of verse, Sy! The images created by your bon mots soar. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ On your winging words ... my Spirit takes flight~ LOVELY~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Beautifuly lyrical...as always. Eric |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
You ride the mist of emerald Isles Raining tears or those of smiles You cross the mot of Builders Bridge Upon an act of privilege Oh Seymour....each morning you gift us with such moving writes. Thankyou for this. More tea please Enchantress! Blueberry muffins are ready. hugs, Chris |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Just leaving a for you... just 'cause... |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Fabulous Sy .... Hugs and Smiles, Marti I take no credit for my poems. Although I write them, I feel |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
Raising my coffee mug to you, Mr. Tabin. I needed to read these words this morning more than you know! Patricia |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Susan, You are a sweetheart. Nancy, Tea for two and I love you. MARK, Cheers back, shall we toast. scorpio Love you too. Marge, How about a big Ericc I like beautiful. Chris Love ya sweets. Sunshine, Hugs and just cause. Marti, You are a dear. Patricia You make me feel so needed. LOL |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
your words paint butterfly wings on moths tis still snowing here...Randy has his boots on and is building a snowman. *ww* How foolish must man be, not to be impressed by mountains and trees |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, LOL now that is a picture, Randy building a snow man. May the warmth of my feelings melt the snow where ever you go. WWDS |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy "Whatever message of intend You take the passage to its end And add it to your daily fair A marker and a place to share" yes, you do just that! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Martie, Yes and thank you my dear. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Whatever message of intend You take the passage to its end And add it to your daily fair A marker and a place to share It is the ghost of magic’s host It is a drink, a wine of toast. Hello Seymour, This is so beautiful. I love your writing so much. This one just seemed to float along as U was reading. Just beautiful. Ethel |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Seymour This was such a stunning piece of writing. "A poet weaves his magical words to create a most beautiful tapestry for us all to admire" Take care......Sue I am in motion |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Ethel, You are a dear and I thank you for the read. Sue, That is a sweet comment, thank you. |
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jaicie114 Senior Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 750On the edge of forever |
Sir Sy... You are truly a master! Thank you! Love and Light...jc This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
jaicie114 Your comments are a delight, thank you. |
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