Crayons, the negative image

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Sadelite
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since 2003-10-11

Posts 2519

0 posted 2004-03-01 07:20 PM

          These crayons I hold in minds hand
          to sculpt images once waxed;
          Like eyes, they melt in wait
          forming puddled mold.

Grover
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since 2004-01-27

Posts 1967
London, ON, Canada

1 posted 2004-03-01 07:25 PM

Unique, expressive image. Very nice! Grover.

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

2 posted 2004-03-01 09:14 PM

Very creative!

KoKo
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since 2003-02-15

Posts 995
Inside the shadow's shadow

3 posted 2004-03-01 10:55 PM

Very much enjoyed.

Sadelite
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since 2003-10-11

Posts 2519

4 posted 2004-03-02 07:21 PM

Thank you Grover, iliana, and ko ko. I appreciate your comments. Have a great week.
Sadie

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

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5 posted 2004-03-02 10:58 PM

(big angel hugs) Awwwwwww, I don't like sad endings, sweet friend, may we all draw in color and wih bright smiles, yay, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sadelite, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

6 posted 2004-03-02 11:32 PM

There is a sweetness in our naive and innocent ways...like love's beginning, bright and unrestricted...
Realities can be harsh and bold...thick lines that cannot settle calmly.
Can you tell you stirred a lot of paint here?
Excellent write.
TD

Sadelite
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since 2003-10-11

Posts 2519

7 posted 2004-03-03 12:01 PM

Noah,
   I don't like sad endings either; I didn't say what could be found in the the molded puddles.  Perhaps, it was a permanency-a puddle of assorted waxings, resembling sheening oil upon water/or maybe not.   Anymore, I never look at things one way too long--kind of like looking at the sun--too blinding.
   Thanks for your comment, Noah.
                Sadie

Sadelite
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since 2003-10-11

Posts 2519

8 posted 2004-03-03 12:06 PM

diamond,
I'm always happy to hear my poetry evokes emotion, but would be saddened if it brought back unwanted pain, or paint, as it may be. I hope things are well with you. Take care,
Sadie

C?
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since 2001-12-29

Posts 190

9 posted 2004-03-03 06:37 AM

ooo oooo, now this is my style!! I like the way with words you've got there
C?

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