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Told You So
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Told You So |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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I am sorry for who I am, how I react and introduce my thoughts, this window of opportunity leaving me slight. I have been attacked by intimate moments, disguised in a love that reigns hope but steals promise, as it guides me through the darkness of night while "told you so" echoes against the walls, challenging. I slowed down to hurry and this was as far as I have gotten. "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I hear that voice saying those words too |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Never be sorry for who you are dear lady. Well written piece. hugs, Chris "At one glance |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
"I slowed down to hurry and this was as far as I have gotten." wow !!! |
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KoKo Senior Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 995Inside the shadow's shadow |
Enjoyed this.  |
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EternitysHorizon Member
since 2002-05-03
Posts 145Twilight's Orchestra |
Beware echoes they can be dangerous "High on the Mountain, where the Sun stil Shines, and the water runs a little lazy." |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
You are who you are, and no apologies are necessary! Your poetry needs no apologies! |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
that last stanza is fantastic!!  |
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Ariana Senior Member
since 2000-10-08
Posts 571Orlando, Florida |
Maureen - great job. Don't change a thing about yourself and who you are. Ariana |
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