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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2004-03-01 05:24 PM


Hey Soft and Beautiful


I spent some
time with you today.
You smiled, you laughed,
you chased my blues away.
What can I do.
What shall I say.
"Hey soft and beautiful,
I almost fell in love
with you today."


JamesLee
February29
2004

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Kristabell
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1 posted 2004-03-01 06:09 PM


Great write! I really enjoyed it.
scorpio
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2 posted 2004-03-01 07:16 PM


Almost?? Maybe you need to spend more time with Soft and Beautiful.  Nicely written.

believe in what your heart feels...

Grover
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3 posted 2004-03-01 07:49 PM


What a feeling, eh? Grover.
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4 posted 2004-03-01 07:52 PM


enjoyed
muted
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5 posted 2004-03-02 03:24 AM


ah, you lucky devil....
this is cute

Pilgrimage
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6 posted 2004-03-02 03:40 PM


Now that's tender. I like it.

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7 posted 2004-03-02 03:44 PM




(big angel hugs) Awwwwwwwww, this is sooooooo passionately beautiful, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

JamesMichael
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8 posted 2004-03-04 11:34 PM


Thank you Kristabell, scorpio, Grover, vandana, muted, Pilgrimage and Noah for the nice responses...James
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