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A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

0 posted 2004-02-26 01:47 AM

Deep into the forest,
Dark secluded place,

You and I share a secret,
A warm passionate embrace,

Tropical smells all around,
gently we lay upon the ground,

You kiss my cheek and pull back my hair,
I am lost inside your lovers stare,

You take my hand and lead underneath this waterfall,
Drops of warm soothing water,big and small,

Falling all over my body like rain in the summertime,
As I am falling into your poetry and rhyme,

You whisper I love you, I want you, You are my one desire,
I need this cool water to help control this fire,

Fire of love burning hot inside,
My love for you I cannot hide,

I dream of this fantasy,
A place I often recall,

Where you are with me,
underneath the waterfall.

Open your eyes, open your mind, open your heart, let me come in and show you love.....~ARH

[This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (02-26-2004 02:41 AM).]

Goldenrose
Member Elite

since 2003-05-30

Posts 3665

1 posted 2004-02-26 04:21 AM

Very beautiful....very gentle love poem ARH....you have not lost your touch at writing love poems since i have been away...
brilliant poem from your red heart of love...

Thank you...

Goldenrose.xxx

''Each soul is potentialy divine..the goal is to manifest that divinity''

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2004-02-26 04:23 AM

OOOOOOOO! VERY PRETTY!

Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

3 posted 2004-02-26 10:24 AM

Beautiful!

Eric

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

4 posted 2004-02-26 10:46 AM

So soft and beautiful, wonderful graphics. Hugs

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

5 posted 2004-02-27 04:10 PM

I've never shared a waterfall... but this sure makes me long to do so. *S* I do love them! *S*

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

6 posted 2004-02-27 04:22 PM

Very very lovely...much enjoyed.
Hugs~

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before~

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

7 posted 2004-03-01 08:48 PM

I dream of this fantasy,
A place I often recall,

Where you are with me,
underneath the waterfall.
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Much enjoyed your free flowing poem and visual effects.

Nicely done ARH~

steavenr
Member Elite

since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

8 posted 2004-03-02 11:48 PM

elegantly melodic...enjoyed immensely

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

9 posted 2004-03-04 11:32 PM

Fantastic...one of my favorites...James

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