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Open Poetry #31

A Fairy Tale

David2
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since 2000-03-22

Posts 407

0 posted 2004-03-01 07:33 AM

A Fairy Tale

A fairy tale is where I wish we dwelt,
Where happy endings wished for just appear.
And where our troubles soon would simply melt,
Disposed of in a river of our tears.
In truth no magic stallion waits to ride,
No sword exists to vanquish all our foes,
Nor mystic spells to sweep our fears aside,
Or I would wield them all against our woes.
And yet my sweet our love may still dispell,
The evils we still battle on our own.
Our love can be our fortress just as well,
A castle built of love instead of stone.

Protected there in comfort safe and warm,
We’ll weather all of life’s rampaging storms

[This message has been edited by David2 (03-01-2004 10:09 AM).]

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
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1 posted 2004-03-01 09:57 AM

David~

Elegance in every line ... but THIS -

'Our love can be our fortress just as well,
A castle built of love instead of stone.'

- simply leaped off the page to catch me *sighing*~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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steavenr
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since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

2 posted 2004-03-02 11:28 PM

this is too well written to not have been commented on more...let's send it back up for another go around

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

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Gaia

3 posted 2004-03-03 09:41 PM

sounds like you've found a way to make a wonderful fairy tale come true

enjoyed

iliana
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since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

4 posted 2004-03-04 01:38 AM

David2 -- excellent! I like happy endings!

muted

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since 2004-01-15

Posts 2949
Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving

5 posted 2004-03-04 04:57 AM

ah, very nice

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