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Heart Thrust......a dodoitsu
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Heart Thrust......a dodoitsu |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
Heart thrust, my beloved flame Lights my core with passion's fire Come to me my love I pray Leave not fervor’s side |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Cool write Steaven. Interesting form, I had to look it up, never seen it before.  |
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Snow
since 2000-10-16
Posts 1170desert flower looking for rain |
i haven't seen many write a dodoitsu. it became a favorite form of mine a few months ago. nicely done. "...why does my skeleton pursue me |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
I am learning from the many styles you are trying on this evening. Perhaps you have worn them before or are they new to you as well? Either way, my friend, your poems suit me just beautifully. Patricia |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
Duncan, thank you but you can find this and other cool forms on http://members.optushome.com.au/kazoom/poetry/dodoitsu.html Snow, glad you liked it…glad you have several that you will hopefully share Pat, they are all new to me…just trying to expand my horizons…since I have so little inspiration from my sheltered, well-ordered life, I need something to bring variety to my writing styles |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
This is an interesting piece of work. Wish I could say I could write that way... but I can't! Great write here!  Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Awwwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, this sounds like such a wonderful poetic form, yay, I should try it sometime, may your heart always beat smooth like wild honey, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Steaven, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Like they often say "you learn something new everyday." I have never even heard of this form before. Thankyou steavenr for sharing this lovely write with us. Chris "At one glance |
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J.Samm Member
since 2004-01-12
Posts 415Iloilo City, Philippines |
passionate write! |
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jaicie114 Senior Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 750On the edge of forever |
steavenr...ditto on not knowing what the form is...but, I sincerely think this would be a smashing verse in any form! Thanks! Love and Light...jc This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light. |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Hot! Hot! Hot! steve you are on fire!!!!! Passionate ~ARH love and hugs! Open your eyes, open your mind, open your heart, let me come in and show you love.....~ARH |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
steavenr Unfamiliar with the form but enjoyed the write. |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
Saunni, thank you, but I dare say you sell yourself short. This was but an exercise I gave myself to exercise my writing skills. Noah, thank you and PLEASE do try it…that would be great! Nightshade, thank you…it was new for me too J.Samm, thank you for noticing jaicie, as always, you are far too kind…thank you ARH, coming from you, I count that high praise indeed Seymour, thank you kindly |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
thanks for the link...the write is cool! |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Steavenur -- what a gorgeous exercise it is! Thanks for the beautiful reading and for the link!  .....jo |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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