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ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
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Michigan, USA

0 posted 2004-02-27 06:22 PM


Winter passes...in some kind of still eclipse
Pebbled ice beneath dusting sleep powder
Sometimes the chill has shaken through me
Taking grasp in plummets that are far too far

A recluse of fantasy and aberrant white light
That clings in beads and leaves my skin wet
The essence where you breathe into me velvet spaces
Warming within the exhale, covering the shivered places

Awakened still, the never sleep of missing so
Between the thrills we used to know and need
As seasons shift the changes taking root and seed
Winter passes on, into the merry melt of once again to plead

Copyright Kkh 2/27/04

© Copyright 2004 Kathleen Harris - All Rights Reserved
Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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Eternity
1 posted 2004-02-27 06:35 PM


Very beautiful! In images and insights.
Love and hugs. Margherita

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
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Canada eh.
2 posted 2004-02-27 06:37 PM


"The essence where you breathe into me velvet spaces
Warming within the exhale, covering the shivered places"

This is truly beautiful Kathleen...
Very much enjoyed.
Hugs~


~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before~
            

SmartChick
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since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown
3 posted 2004-02-27 06:44 PM


This is so beautiful.
BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23
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By the Seaside
4 posted 2004-03-01 08:59 PM


A recluse of fantasy and aberrant white light
That clings in beads and leaves my skin wet
The essence where you breathe into me velvet spaces
Warming within the exhale, covering the shivered places


It doesn't matter what you write...
you poetry is delightful, as always Kathleen~


wordwizard
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since 2003-09-08
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on the way to next world
5 posted 2004-03-01 09:12 PM


a pleasure to read


steavenr
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6 posted 2004-03-02 11:52 PM


you are masterful in the art of verbal imagery...great write!
Kahlil
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since 2003-04-12
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7 posted 2004-03-03 02:06 AM


This is an incredible unfolding...very sensual....shiver shiver...~K~
Tiersdin
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since 2000-11-17
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east coast
8 posted 2004-03-03 03:36 PM


I couldn't have stopped in and not comment on this wonderful peice.

nice to read you again, TD.


~Tier

iliana
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since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434
USA
9 posted 2004-03-04 01:44 AM


TD -- lovely flow in this piece and I liked the ending a lot.  
passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
10 posted 2004-03-04 03:32 AM


you certainly have a way of writing out beauty
Ericc
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since 2003-01-31
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11 posted 2004-03-04 10:40 AM


Perfect!


Eric

Startime55
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since 2003-04-05
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Alberta, Canada
12 posted 2004-03-04 11:58 AM


A vision Stunning in it's perfection...Well done...

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