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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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There is strength in the newness of an early spring sunshine, one that warms me even without the arms that would make my reason for being... [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (03-11-2004 03:47 PM).] |
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Krishankins
since 2002-06-23
Posts 972Texas |
I'm feeling the warm sunshine already!!! Nice one! If you're not yourself, then there is no you. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Lovely when we realize we can make it on our own... and love that warm spring sunshine! Hugs~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you, |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
What?!!! You don't have arms?!! How do you type, for cryin' out loud? Listen Maureen, you of all people should not define yourself by the presence of somebody else's arms. You are an incredible, delightful person who offers so much to so many of us. Having someone else's arms around you would just tie you down. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Spring is all about renewal and new beginnings. This is lovely. hugs, Chris For it was not into my ear you whispered, but into my heart. It was not my lips you kissed, but my soul. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
but Lj...hmmm...maybe it is that I wish "to be tied down" you always make me smile even when I am sick and feeling "lousy" thank you,  M |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yes, there is  |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Hey Maureen I like it.....Better to get your hugs from that beautiful sunshine than none at all.......nicely done! Eric |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
I was going to say...ah...what LJ said, but he said it first! Tied down? Are we still on the same subject?  It was a lovely piece... "sit on top of the world and tell me how you feel...'cause what you feel is what I feel for you.." |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
HI Maureen. I am trying to believe this..that the warmness of life and spring is ok with or without true love. Have you mastered the thought yet? Nicely done here. Sandra |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
nope Sandra, not mastered it and I am so sick today that if someone offered to trade bodies with me I would... It is always nicer to have the arms and caring...today I have the fever for the warmth and the quilt for the wrapping. p.s. I lie alot Nice to see you, always M |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Sunshining in spring will bring newness and happiness to everyone...nice poem M.... Thank you.... Goldenrose..... ''Each soul is potentialy divine..the goal is to manifest that divinity'' |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Whether springtime or wintertime..being in love always makes you feel more alive..hugss..enjoyed very much Maureen
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
hey girl...always good to see you back hugs M |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
M -- I'm glad you feel it! Such a warm, uplifting poem!  ........jo |
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