Open Poetry #31 |
pan-fried (for Richy) |
steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
pan-fried, soul-led, dyed meatless state of mind filet of soul denied reckoning spatter-felt pots of decaying spoon-fed lies, pan-fired, pan-fried |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
okay, I'm hungry |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Pan-fried, raw hide self pride now denied cold eyed, lost bride now decide, cut and dried Hearts inside, now divide Turn of tide, coincide with my pride, now inside will take world for a ride Biggie size, my pan fries Thanks Steaven Yes I tried Had to quit Now I'm fried LOL Thanks Steaven That was fun! |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Almost musical, very good! Grover. |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
lyrical! This one rings, steavenr! Sadelite |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Very good, steaven!! Hugs Ethel |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
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