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Dragon-Fly |
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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind 
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So I make you painted scenes in still waters yet each night finds me searching for color would you understand? each stone is fragile each with a place The sound of wind undresses trees naked open these same trees that bare fruit when winter dies in a field of stars, I once touched your palms felt love stronger then sky “leave the memories of dragon-flies in flight” let beauty sleep in morning resting softly in dusk take what you will before the next song comes along and I fade a tiny dancer in your arms I will re-arrange the flowers later -- Your name a trace of light upon my lips Then will you understand your depth--& my inability to stand still for you to see that which I am a piece of fallen silk invisible to dawn ~~**~~ There are moments when speech is but a mouth pressed lightly and humbly against the angel's hands. [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (02-18-2004 07:31 PM).] |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
in a field of stars, I once touched your palms felt love stronger then sky ~~~~~~~~~~~~ Your name a trace of light upon my lips ~~~~~~~~~~~~ *sigh* and your poetry...a trace of healing on my heart.   Well I cant say what I might believe ... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Lovely Lauren... Your words dance gently on my mind long after reading them. Beautiful lady..just like you. Hugs~ ~ Whatever our souls are made of, |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Greeneyes - you sure do write them well... |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
speechless.... perhaps later I can find words.. for now, I'll just read it again... |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Exceptional! Grover. |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
such a lovely poem...but I think my favorite part (and there were many) is: "The sound of wind undresses trees naked open these same tress that bare fruit when winter dies" there are so many levels...so many layers...so many connotations...it will take some time to digest this delicate write...thank you for sharing |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big angel hugs) Awwwwwwww, this is gorgeous, sweet friend, may all the flowers and lilypads soon fill the waters and the dragonfly nestle softly on the most softest flower, yay, God Bless You, I love this, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lauren, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Lauren The dragonfly is one of my favorite things...you have done her proud! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Lovely...James |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Lauren, your writing is truly unique And, truly exceptional... I've become a big fan!  |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
You have such a lovely way of putting words together! |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
lucky are the words intrinsic to your lips... |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Simply beautiful......  perfect title enjoyed _______ice ><> |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Lauren, do "you understand your depth" as a poetess and how you nurture the poetic souls of your readers? Yours is a rare talent. You truly add to this sea of blue with your graceful writing. Warm hugs & smiles, Linda |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
beautifully written...filled with expressions of love, a deep spiritual love. Awesome |
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