Open Poetry #31 |
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Of Flesh And Prayers |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
First...we belong only to a touch. Yet flesh alone is a shallow prayer. There is always more. Even the deepest water parts to the unexpected grace of reaching hands. First we belong only to the touch. And fingers pray fine along the lips of our desires. We give ourselves to this... A surrender to flesh and shallow prayers. And only now do we taste - A hint of something more. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
a marvelous trajectory |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You, too, cause me to leave but one word... breath-taking! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Amazing....exquisite!! Hugs~
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Ericc So seamlessly you paint love. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Ericc I go along with LeeJ. |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
Beautifully written to caress the heart and soul. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
“Even the deepest water parts to the unexpected grace of reaching hands” Your soul shines so bright in these words of power and grace. And your fingers pray through the touch of desire flooding my heart with such love! And with this love a bridge is built to all that exists beyond .... where only eyes of love see Dear Eric, this is exquisite and carries me "beyond". I love you, Margherita ![]() |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
A celebration of life! Outstanding. TD |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
as always, I'm touched |
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suthern![]() ![]()
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I always love your work... but this is one of my favorites... yes! *S* |
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jaicie114 Senior Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 750On the edge of forever |
Merlin... Your magic never ceases to amaze me. You speak in terms that only the brightest souls and most beautiful beings are graced with eyes to see and hearts to feel. Thank you for translating it for the rest of us. Love and Light...jc ![]() This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light. |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
This write esteems you! Grover. |
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