Open Poetry #31 |
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For Now...Everything Waits |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
It's the stillness. Grown heavy between us...as if even the subtle movement of our breath belongs to nothing more than this. We drink this in. In time...we will give ourselves back to motion. Exchanging silence for the growling needs of our demands. Yet for now...we lie thick in the stillness of our moment. And everything else... Waits. Eric |
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illusion Member
since 2001-06-19
Posts 296 |
What rich sensuality. I like this very much! |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
Nice Eric, You bring me close up into this poignant moment...~P |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very sensual Eric.... Extremely well written. Hugs~ ~ Whatever our souls are made of, |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() (big angel hugs) Oh Eric, this is wonderful, sweet friend, such romance always sings in your words, yay, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Eric, thank you for sharing! ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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Ravenwolfvoyager Member
since 2003-12-25
Posts 326 |
Outstanding write Ericc!! Silence is deafening. Thank you for sharing this great piece of work. |
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Nightshade![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Yet for now...we lie thick in the stillness of our moment. And everything else... Waits. I love this! Excellent. hugs, Chris "At one glance |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
There are so many forms of stillness... so very many. This encompasses two, or three. Thank you, Ericc. |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Waiting to see your words posted in poetry wass well worth the wait! ~ARH ![]() Love and Hugs Open your eyes, open your mind, open your heart, let me come in and show you love.....~ARH |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
In the stillness you touch upon another world, beyond motion. And there is such peace emanating from your words, all the growling needs dissolve. Thank you dear Eric for sharing this magical place with us. I love you. Margherita |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
excellent...great piece |
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MGROVES![]() ![]()
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
very stimulating and sensual i thank you very much |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Ericc -- I liked the way you made the world hold its breath in this one! ......jo |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
The waiting is a long time coming, and all the better when it's worth it. Nicely done, Ericc~ |
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