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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium 
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soak your body into freshness of the flowing river deep-blue or take a swim in the vast spread of ocean’s delightful sheen lay your real self on the coastline merge with nature enjoy and dry free yourself of selfish desires bleach out of you the grey falseness pure shall then be bathing you in the primary colours of true -:-:-:- beach-or-money? led to bleach-harmony led to harmony beach sometimes time is money; other times time is everything; yet there are times when money is more than everything ... it is a rat race in the search of the moving cheese :-) and changing sceneries perhaps! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
pure shall then be bathing you in the primary colours of true Beautifully said! Love, Margherita  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Sudhir! So good to read you here today! Very much enjoyed this piece. Hugs~ ~ Whatever our souls are made of, |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Very nice! Grover. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I guess you read the book "Who Moved My Cheese?" That's a great book! I have to find mine again...I think I gave it to a friend, yes, I will go buy another one... thanks for reminding oh....and great poem here Sudhir! Beautiful! |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
free yourself of selfish desires bleach out of you the grey falseness ~*~ As an old grandmother would say... add the bluing... it makes things appear brighter...  Well done, Sudhir! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sudhir, Good write, enjoyed the read. |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
pure shall then be bathing you in the primary colours of true Oooh, into the library it goes! Nice to see your smiling face again my friend and to read your awesome words! hugs, Chris "At one glance |
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illusion Member
since 2001-06-19
Posts 296 |
I'm glad the title of this drew me in. I like it very much! |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
What a welcome invitation for both body and spirit on this icy winter day...Thank you ~P |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Hi Sudhir, glad I caught this one, it's just beautiful. And thanks again for helping out my Irish photographer friend with a tour 'round Bruxelles. Next Friday I'll pick him up from the Airport at 7.30 pm. Titia Like scattered leaves...my words will flow |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
A bit late... but all the same... I would like to thank you all for your time and your kind responses... Regards Sudhir |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
Sudhir, This is brilliantly written. I love the flow, lesson, and logic in this. Enjoyed, Sadelite |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Nice clean images of freshness Dave |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sudhir So glad this came back up so I could appreciate it. |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
I like this alot. -Juju |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Thanks, my dear friends... regards sudhir |
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