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Sudhir Iyer
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0 posted 2004-02-19 12:04 PM


soak your body
into freshness
of the flowing
river deep-blue

or take a swim
in the vast spread
of ocean’s
delightful sheen

lay your real self
on the coastline
merge with nature
enjoy and dry

free yourself of
selfish desires
bleach out of you
the grey falseness

pure shall then be
bathing you in
the primary
colours of true



    -:-:-:-
beach-or-money?
     led to
bleach-harmony
     led to
harmony beach

sometimes time is money; other times time is everything; yet there are times when money is more than everything ... it is a rat race in the search of the moving cheese :-) and changing sceneries

perhaps!

© Copyright 2004 Sudhir Iyer - All Rights Reserved
Margherita
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Eternity
1 posted 2004-02-19 12:48 PM


pure shall then be
bathing you in
the primary
colours of true


Beautifully said!
Love, Margherita

Enchantress
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2 posted 2004-02-19 12:49 PM


Sudhir!  So good to read you here today!
Very much enjoyed this piece.
Hugs~

  ~ Whatever our souls are made of,
      his and mine are the same. ~      
            

Grover
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3 posted 2004-02-19 12:55 PM


Very nice! Grover.
passing shadows
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4 posted 2004-02-19 01:12 PM


I guess you read the book "Who Moved My Cheese?" That's a great book! I have to find mine again...I think I gave it to a friend, yes, I will go buy another one...

thanks for reminding

oh....and great poem here Sudhir! Beautiful!

Sunshine
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5 posted 2004-02-19 01:32 PM


free yourself of
selfish desires
bleach out of you
the grey falseness

~*~

As an old grandmother would say...
add the bluing...
it makes things appear brighter...

Well done, Sudhir!

Seymour Tabin
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6 posted 2004-02-19 01:40 PM


Sudhir,
Good write, enjoyed the read.

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just out of reach
7 posted 2004-02-19 01:40 PM


pure shall then be
bathing you in
the primary
colours of true

Oooh, into the library it goes! Nice to see your smiling face again my friend and to read your awesome words! hugs, Chris

"At one glance
I love you
With a thousand hearts."


— Mihri Hatun, Turkish poet



    

illusion
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8 posted 2004-02-19 02:33 PM


I'm glad the title of this drew me in. I like it very much!
choshi
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since 2004-01-01
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9 posted 2004-02-19 03:19 PM


What a welcome invitation for both body and spirit on this icy winter day...Thank you ~P
Titia Geertman
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Netherlands
10 posted 2004-02-20 02:55 PM


Hi Sudhir, glad I caught this one, it's just beautiful.

And thanks again for helping out my Irish photographer friend with a tour 'round Bruxelles. Next Friday I'll pick him up from the Airport at 7.30 pm.

Titia

Like scattered leaves...my words will flow

Sudhir Iyer
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11 posted 2004-03-05 07:19 AM


A bit late... but all the same...

I would like to thank you all for your time and your kind responses...

Regards
Sudhir

Sadelite
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12 posted 2004-03-05 08:07 PM


Sudhir,
   This is brilliantly written.  I love the flow, lesson, and logic in this.  Enjoyed,
                 Sadelite

DavePage
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13 posted 2004-03-05 09:38 PM


Nice clean images of freshness

Dave

Martie
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14 posted 2004-03-05 09:43 PM


Sudhir

So glad this came back up so I could appreciate it.  

Juju
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15 posted 2004-03-06 12:56 PM


I like this alot.

-Juju

Sudhir Iyer
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16 posted 2004-03-24 01:06 PM


Thanks, my dear friends...

regards
sudhir

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