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his gain,my pain
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his gain,my pain |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
tired of this place he keeps me in each night he gives to me his personal hell within i can't allow anymore pain from one who seems to enjoy and gain wont take the time to see who really looses blind to reality makes all something it's not places on others thinking never caught so sad that one believes as he does destroying one who really loves ever hear an angel cry in the night unable to move so filled with fright evil is now near must stay quiet god please dont let me show my fear |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
MGROVES Good thoughts, good write, good read. |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
"unable to move so filled with fright" your write moved me... Keep that pen moving! Smile sent. Sadie |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
Yikes, this is frightening. You've written it so well.... I fear for this person... ~K~ |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Excellent, very moving, emotionally charged!  |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
thanks for your replies they mean more than you could know |
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