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Open Poetry #31

into the mist i fall

noah j
Member

since 2003-03-05

Posts 82
on the open road with the wind blowing in my hair

0 posted 2004-02-17 08:24 PM

red roses
filled with pains ball
i sit and stare as
into the mist i fall

bartender serves a
woman dressed as a doll
i sit and stare as
into the mist i fall

broken mirror
shows all i call
my shattered life as
into the mist i fall

the only people for me are the mad ones-mad to live, mad to be saved, desirous of everything at once--jack kerouac

Grover
Senior Member

since 2004-01-27

Posts 1967
London, ON, Canada

1 posted 2004-02-17 08:30 PM

Very nice... excellent images! Grover.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2004-02-18 04:08 AM

ouch

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

3 posted 2004-02-21 12:28 PM

Powerful imagery.

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