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Scentimental Valentine
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Scentimental Valentine |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
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Scentimental Valentine If you were a chef, would you hug me and then quiche me? If I was a clock, would you wind me all the time? If you were a bat, you’d be fun to hang around with! If I was a piggy, would I be your Valenswines? If I was a farmer, I would give you hogs, and kisses If I was a snake, then I would give you lots of hisses If I was a light bulb, would you love me a whole watt? If I was a heater, would you let me make you hot! Knock, Knock! Who is there? Orange. Orange who? Orange you going to tell me just how much you love me too? Knock, Knock! Who is there? Olive. Olive who? Oh thank you Sweet Pimento, did you know, Olive you too? If I was a skunky, would I make you scent-imental? If I was a legume, would you be my only lentil? If you were the ice cream, would you melt all over me? If I was the fudgy, I would be on you, so sweet? If you were a sheet of paper, my pen would be blue I can’t tell you just how much “I dot my i’s on you!” If I was a pillow, would you hug me all the time? If I was a love poem, could you read between the lines? [This message has been edited by Richy (02-15-2004 09:24 PM).] |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Very sweet write Richy. TD |
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S Arthur Grey Senior Member
since 2001-03-19
Posts 719woven by a poet's loom |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Richy Very clever!  |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Richy!!! Aren't you the clever one! If I had to pick and choose, like I always do, I would pick this...... If you were a sheet of paper, my pen would be blue I can’t tell you just how much “I dot my i’s on you!” How sweet it is! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Adorable!!! I love this!! Hugs~ ~ Whatever our souls are made of, |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
if i were a carpenter and u were my lady, would u marry me anyway, would u have my baby? clever clever, just as the bluesgirl said |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
loved your wordplay Richy, especially valenswine (As a farmgirl, I had a swine project at the fair-very intelligent animals BTW!)! Cute and adorable, with lots of patterned play! Happy belated valentine's day! Sadie |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
If I was a sculptor... but then again no Or a man, who makes potions, in a traveling show Ooops! that ones been written already... lol If I were a carpenter, and you we’re my bride We’d live in the home of, my heart deep inside... |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
whatcha go and be so cute for? look at ya..always making us "aaawwwhhhh" and *sighhh* ...this is adorable...here's your quiche  |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
cool, Richy, you are more than a wordsmith; you are a word wrangler...so very talented |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Thank you everyone for the wonderful comments! I really do appreciate each and every one of them! Richy  |
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ParisGrl Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 610 |
Richy, You are very talented.....I love to read your poems. Keep up the good work! ~Laura~ |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big angel hugs) Awwwwwwww, this made me cry because this is sooooooo beautifully romantic and cute, sweet friend, I'm blessed to know that there are still people in the world like you who believe in innocent, spirited love that brings true happiness as I know just how you feel as I always hug my pillow and pretend it's a girl! (smiles) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Richy, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Thank You Parisgrl, that was very kind of you to say! Noah... don’t ever change okay? |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
ooooops! I wonder how I missed this one! Great write Richy! I really enjoyed the cuteness and word play! |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Thanks Dixie! |
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Snow
since 2000-10-16
Posts 1170desert flower looking for rain |
"If I was a pillow, would you hug me all the time? If I was a love poem, could you read between the lines?" hmm.. seems like thoughts that coulda come outta my own head... my favorite part.. for personal reasons. hugs, snowy "yet each man kills the thing he loves |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Mine too Snowy, for the same reasons... |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
LOL! Richy, even though it's not Valentine's Day any longer, this is still worth reading! Very, very cute and clever! What a wit! ........jo |
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Youngatheart Member
since 2003-12-30
Posts 333 |
Where did you hide this one, Richy? teehee!! |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Iliana ~ Thank you so much Jo! Your comments are always a joy! I hope you have a wonderful weekend  Youngatheart ~ Hi Young One! have you tried that low carb bread. You know the kind that you make in the bread maker, that cost like $6.00 for a small box, that makes one measly loaf... lol My advice, don’t bother... I’m still chewing on a piece, from last week... lol So nice to hear from you Youngy, have a great weekend. |
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Youngatheart Member
since 2003-12-30
Posts 333 |
Oh Gosh, Richy.....that stuff takes like cardboard....still chewing on a piece from last week....hahahahahahaha. |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Now seriously...Youngatheart When I said a week, I didn't really mean, a week... Guuulp! ahhhh! Ohhh... Finally... I meant... two...  |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Geez Richy , Over here I am almost a day in time , yet almost missed your cute Valentine another gem of a poem write Hope |
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Youngatheart Member
since 2003-12-30
Posts 333 |
You are so funny!! |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Hope ~ Ohh Thank you Hope! It's better late then never right? I’m glad you got to read it, and thank you for the nice reply! Youngster ~ Thanks Young One... sorry it took me so long to reply... I was pinching a small loaf... ! ... you know, that bread I was telling you about... yeah, just pinched me off a little piece... gonna give it another go... HmmMMm chewWwww... Dang! I’ve had taffy that was less chewy... lol Hey, I wonder how many calories you can lose doing aerobic chewing... Gee... this loaf, might actually do me some good after all... |
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