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David2 Member
since 2000-03-22
Posts 407 |
Years When time as time must always, claims its due Away the years like so much sand are swept. When seasons left to love are far too few And rivers overflow with tears we've wept. Our love will be our comfort and our guide And memories will brighten waning days. While youth, eternal youth, will so abide, Forever frozen there within our gaze. Though stars may lose their majesty and fail Bereft of any need or will to thrive, Our love will never lessen, dim, or pale, But ever deepen, flourish, and survive. So let us face tomorrow free of dread Rejoicing in the journey just ahead [This message has been edited by David2 (02-18-2004 09:03 PM).] |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Very nicely done David. Yes, we all should just enjoy to-day, for it might be all we have. Enjoyed. Chris "At one glance |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
nice vocab in this one , i like the images also , i can see this one as a vision , stay with the groove jwolf |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
much needed advice |
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Kazm Member
since 2003-11-13
Posts 99 |
This is a big poem in a very small package. I think it should be read several times, in order to get the full effect of the words and the way they are used. Kaz |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Wise. A great poem! Grover. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I like this very much... you know you have something special when you're looking forward to taking each step together. *S* |
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Ravenwolfvoyager Member
since 2003-12-25
Posts 326 |
Truly another fine piece. As before its easy to see that you move within your words. Outstanding. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big angel hugs) Oh David, I couldn't agree with you more, dearest friend, we must embrace tomorrow without the past dominating, like living "yestermorrow" as I like to put it! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet David, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
yesterday is gone, tomorrow may never come today is the day to bring hearts and souls together as one. i liked your writing very much |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
David, this was so wonderful -- I especially lie the rhythm you used with these words. .....jo |
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