Open Poetry #31 |
Evidence of You |
A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Walking along the shore, looking for more, there I see... evidence of you, Staring at a face in a crowd, shouting your name out loud, there I see... evidence of you, A flower in bloom, the warm sun in June, there I see... evidence.of you, The stars in the sky, Sometimes we ask why?, there I see... evidence of you, The gift of a lonely heart, tears cleansing, new start, there I see... evidence of you, A newborn babys smile, friendship that goes the extra mile, there I see... evidence of you, Blood stained tears, naills on a cross, death without fear, saving the lost, There I see.... JESUS (evidence of you) JESUS (evidence of you) JESUS Clouds in a sky people cry and there I see.... Evidence of you, Lonely man on a street, wants soemthing to eat, people in other countries cry, for something missing inside, There I see evidence of you Jesus.... Open your eyes, open your mind, open your heart, let me come in and show you love.....~ARH |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
beautiful write...very spiritual |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Jesus, Jesus, Jesus, sweetest name I know...James |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Dear ARH, a great vision you have shared, enjoyed the read, thank you my friend. Sincerely Rick |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
RomanticHeart~ This is spiritually moving ... oh, so lovely~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Excellent. Reminds me or words Mother Thersa once shared when asked of her encounters is the slums of Calcutta..."I see the face of Jesus in all of His distressing guises." Eric |
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*Belabebeautiful*
since 2003-01-03
Posts 696washington, USA |
sigh...Very beautiful...and very well done too, my thoughts before getting to the bottom was that it sounded like a poem about the lord and lo and behold it was! Very nicely done, very spiritual and moving. ~Live and Laugh~ Because of you I laugh a little harder, smile a little more, and cry a little less |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
A Romantic Heart -- a beautiful write! hugs, jo |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
A Romantic Heart And a wonderful Heart Very beautiful Princess! |
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Ravenwolfvoyager Member
since 2003-12-25
Posts 326 |
Beautiful ARH, very descriptive and compassionate that touches on despair and hope. Excellent work!! |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
beautiful |
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