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Silent and Still |
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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind 
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Somewhere beyond midnight rain pours shifting shadows nights grow longer -- this night maybe I will escape to the waters edge -- & dark shades of bare trees as if he knows beauty These days my dreams are colored with blue coral -- no matter how time has passed, from stones to fire the void is never full our faith aligned in different stars searching for passage deep within Where have I been? A memory trailing some long forgotten yesterday a glimpse of naked illusion and there I remained silent and still-- Our lips touched the first kiss consuming my soul &now darkness finds me with pale moon watching petals fall ~~**~~ There are moments when speech is but a mouth pressed lightly and humbly against the angel's hands. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
"Our lips touched the first kiss consuming my soul &now darkness finds me with pale moon watching petals fall" Lovely, sad and lovely writing, Greeneyes. |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Oh, I liked this a lot! Especially the ending: "Our lips touched the first kiss consuming my soul &now darkness finds me with pale moon watching petals fall" Wonderful Lauren! I hope all is well Richy |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Lauren "These days my dreams are colored with blue coral -- no matter how time has passed, from stones to fire the void is never full our faith aligned in different stars" You always write such beauty.  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"Our lips touched the first kiss consuming my soul &now darkness finds me with pale moon watching petals fall" So beautiful Lauren...so very beautiful. Hugs~ ~ Whatever our souls are made of, |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Such a beautiful poem! Grover. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice  |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
this night maybe I will escape to the waters edge -- & dark shades of bare trees ~~~~~ These days my dreams are colored with blue coral -- no matter how time has passed, from stones to fire the void is never full our faith aligned in different stars searching for passage deep within Where have I been? A memory trailing some long forgotten yesterday a glimpse of naked illusion and there I remained silent and still-- Our lips touched the first kiss consuming my soul &now darkness finds me with pale moon ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ OH GIRLIE... you haunt places I havent let anyone in for so long now... gawd......... I remember what it felt to write like this.... (and the reasons why we must) no matter how time has passed, from stones to fire the void is never full our faith aligned in different stars yessssssss ....... (different stars...but they share the same sky.)  Well I cant say what I might believe ... but if God made you ... he's in love with me. 5 for fighting |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
From thought to words back to thought this one envelops the soul from beginning to end in it's trasition. Still writing treasures I see and just to bring to light of few of my favorite lines ... =================== this night maybe I will escape to the waters edge -- & dark shades of bare trees =================== These days my dreams are colored with blue coral -- no matter how time has passed, from stones to fire the void is never full our faith aligned in different stars =================== Our lips touched the first kiss consuming my soul &now darkness finds me with pale moon =================== |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
sad...beautiful...love them that way, yes I do |
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*Belabebeautiful*
since 2003-01-03
Posts 696washington, USA |
The images that this poem conjures to the mind are hauntingly beautiful and simply breathtaking. So vivid...well done! ~Live and Laugh~ Because of you I laugh a little harder, smile a little more, and cry a little less |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
you tug, and you touch my memories and heart with such grace....   sis.. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
this night maybe I will escape to the waters edge -- & dark shades of bare trees as if he knows beauty These days my dreams are colored with blue coral -- no matter how time has passed, from stones to fire the void is never full our faith aligned in different stars searching for passage deep within lady... you always amaze me with your words and the beauty you can present... as if I know beauty..... |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Wow...!!!! Eric |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Your poetry is so full of grace and the endless wonder of love and loving. Enjoyed, so much!! Hugs Lauren~ |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Now, don't you know, considering all and all...I'm in like with this? |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Oh, this was gorgeous (or however it's spelled!)! Wonderfully written...loved the style... jealous am I. jwesley |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Our lips touched the first kiss consuming my soul &now darkness finds me with pale moon watching petals fall So beautiful, Lauren. Very, very much so, my friend.  Hugs Ethel |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Awwwwwwwww, this is soooooo pretty, sweet friend, blue coral is in my dreams plenty of times as I always dream of swimnming in seas of rainbows, God Bless You, this is enchanting, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lauren, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Very captivating write! Attracted by the title, the promise of depth was met! Love, Margherita |
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