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Why the Tears?
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Why the Tears? |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio 
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The snow rearranges itself fallng off rooftops born again a revival of white playstuff for red mittens silverbirds cross the flawless sky there is quiet here the mood is sunlit grey winter is tiring february longs for a facelift the sky is infinite why are tears still shed beneath such pageantry? |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Great great write! And makes me want to reach out and hug you, dear Michele. Love, Margherita  |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
This gripped my attention, you are an incredible talent. The thaw of winter, yes I love this.... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I often wodner why something can be so beautiful and so sad at the same time my mind just went a thousand places when I read this Michelle...thanks for the inspiration |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
Beautiful mix of feelings and images, melting snow and tears.... In endless winter even the snow has turned gray, so long this wait.... |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
thans guys and gals |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
In endless winter even the snow has turned gray, so long this wait.... winter weary wet winds whistle windows will warm |
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bklynboy Senior Member
since 2002-12-15
Posts 660florida |
why are tears still shed beneath such pageantry? Who knows? Glad winter is winding down, its cold down here in florida...brrrr |
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Ravenwolfvoyager Member
since 2003-12-25
Posts 326 |
Your write are always inspiring and a pleasure. It's not so much reading your writes alone its becoming a part of and learning through them. Thank you!! |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed this much |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
even mother nature shares sorrow of the day we call tomorrow ... its warming up a little out there! |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
thanks again for reading and commenting |
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