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A Rose Through The Heart...repost
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A Rose Through The Heart...repost |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
Sweet, Turtle Dove, enamored I sing my love so powerful, so true. You are a Rose, an arrow shot clear through my heart. Your honeyed words drip down and cover my soul. I dance in the rhythmic beat of love's song. Come, be my gentle Dove. Soar with me to far beyond, to love's eternal skies. Lover of my dreams, lay beside me. While I stroke your silken curls. My fingers playing a tune of their own...touching, sending pulsing messages, electricity through the very core of your being. All the while, enamored I sing a Valentine ballad to you. With each new beat, with each new arrow shot a rose goes straight ~~~through my heart. |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Ivy Rose This was so very beautiful and I am surprised that I am the first to comment on such a lovely piece of writing. Take care.......Sue I am in motion |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
I agree, absolutely beautiful, my friend. jwesley |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Ivy Rose, this is a soft romantic poem and I enjoyed every word of it. You touched my heart. Love, Margherita  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Ivy Rose Lovely, just lovely. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Ivy, you write of love so passionately, beautifully and elegantly... |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Ivy, this is so beautiful. I'm glad that I didn't miss reading it.  Hugs  Ethel |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
IvyRose, what a beautiful valentine this is! |
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