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ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

0 posted 2004-02-15 02:10 PM

There shall marshal roughed edges, haunting brisk winds patron
Blown in on a new season, a door opens to thriving seedlings taken shelter
Could there be more hope, more inspiration…more light?
Truly peeking from the frost lines of an endless tan…
Tantalizing spirits to be born again into the free of innocence
Sloughing off the peelings of a deadened hearted winter
But the sift of full bloom whispered to the forest floor
And rising yet again to peer so humbly at first…yet thirst calls
Beckon to the treetops to spit the buds of tomorrow to the sun
Like orange seeds from a child’s giggling smile
And grow…grow into the skies of finger paint and sponge
Cake yellow…sleepy eyed to sunsets of fullest mellow
Conjuring gems to sparkle in darkness of a spring night
A Huron’s flight…into the parchment of a new day
Sent away, the returning to be measured
Astonished

Copyright kkh 2/15/04

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

1 posted 2004-02-15 02:21 PM

You carry with you a bag filled with images
and metaphors that I wish I had about half
of...Let's see, anything else I need to
mention? Nope...astonished am I...

Grover
Senior Member

since 2004-01-27

Posts 1967
London, ON, Canada

2 posted 2004-02-15 02:22 PM

Lots of great examples of good images (Cake yellow…sleepy eyed to sunsets of fullest mellow)! Grover.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2004-02-15 02:40 PM

Kathleen once again you astound me with a very beautiful write..
...full of magical imagery.
Wonderful write.
Hugs~

  ~ Whatever our souls are made of,
      his and mine are the same. ~

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

4 posted 2004-02-15 03:36 PM

Kathleen, another beautiful painting from
your pen. very beautiful is this!!

Hugs

Ethel

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

5 posted 2004-02-15 03:42 PM

truly enjoyed seeing what you see, my friend.

Wonderful words and write...

jwesley

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

6 posted 2004-02-15 04:23 PM

ThisDiamond
A very good write, enjoyed.

S Arthur Grey
Senior Member

since 2001-03-19

Posts 719
woven by a poet's loom

7 posted 2004-02-15 04:36 PM

"Truly peeking from the frost lines of an endless tan…"
Interesting . . .
. . . a line that would not have occurred to me.

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

8 posted 2004-02-15 05:59 PM

Kathleen~

'the sift of full bloom whispered to the forest floor'

And you heard it all, sweeping it into this beauty of a write~

Again ... you rise ... creme dela creme~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

[email protected]

Richy
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 3050

9 posted 2004-02-15 06:14 PM

“Truly peeking from the frost lines of an endless tan…”

“And grow…grow into the skies of finger paint and sponge”

Such beautiful writing TD!

You always amaze me!

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

10 posted 2004-02-15 11:21 PM

Truly peeking from the frost lines of an endless tan…

Kathleen~

You are a poetess of everlasting images,
and truly a delight in every sense of the word.

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

11 posted 2004-02-15 11:27 PM

And this is astonishing, as well! Brilliant portrait!

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