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quick fish in the sand
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quick fish in the sand |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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"love" she called she said "come here" we hooked our pinkies injun style we walked into the center square we saw a blanket blooming miles gather down to avenue dots of white and specks of blue "love" in stitch of fortitude impressionistic smile she knew "this one is the one" she drew a quick fish in the sand... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
and thank you for sharing her |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
i love the last line , it makes the whole thing sparkle back to the title : ) and cool name blaze , wolfy |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
wise lady you are how you sneak that bit of wisdom in on us  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
serenity Some fish make their home in the sand.  |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Drawing  here...What visuals! What sight. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Excellent!! Love this keeper Ser! ~Hugs to you lady~ ~ Whatever our souls are made of, |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Not an unneeded word in the whole poem, awesome write, serenity...form and content enjoyed ________ice ><> |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
This is just so cool.  hugs, Chris |
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