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choshi
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since 2004-01-01

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New York

0 posted 2004-02-12 04:08 PM

Ice storm's midst;
chimney smoke rising
teapot whistles.

muted

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since 2004-01-15

Posts 2949
Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving

1 posted 2004-02-12 05:43 PM

seems youve been missing awhile!
hmm..cup of tea?
...yes thanks, that would be nice!

and so is your little gem of a poem! (as always)

Enchantress
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Canada eh.

2 posted 2004-02-12 05:44 PM

Ohhh..love this Paul!
Yes...very warm touch with the tea.
Hugs~

  ~ Whatever our souls are made of,
      his and mine are the same. ~

garysgirl

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Florida, USA

3 posted 2004-02-12 06:11 PM

Paul, sounds delicious!!

Hugs

Ethel

NewEnglandlazurlu
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A Mountain Paradise

4 posted 2004-02-12 06:16 PM

I love this and would be honored to have a cup of tea with you.

Hugs, Marti

I take no credit for my poems. Although I write them, I feel
more like I transcribe them. It's just a matter of listening.

Grover
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since 2004-01-27

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London, ON, Canada

5 posted 2004-02-12 06:31 PM

Very nice! Grover.

inkedgoddess
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since 2002-11-19

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6 posted 2004-02-12 11:37 PM

Ice storm's midst;
chimney smoke rising
teapot whistles.

o the water cycle
drip drip drip
frozen toes

Sadelite
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since 2003-10-11

Posts 2519

7 posted 2004-02-12 11:41 PM

The whistling teapot sounds a lot better than the cold whistling wind! Your poem was very nicely written including vivid sights and sounds. I enjoyed this.
Sadie

passing shadows
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8 posted 2004-02-13 03:56 AM

nice

choshi
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since 2004-01-01

Posts 1184
New York

9 posted 2004-02-13 08:34 AM

hmm..cup of tea?
...yes thanks, that would be nice!

and so is your little gem of a poem! (as always)

My pleasure, Dawn,......Milk or lemon. Sugar or honey?

Thank you ~P

Now then!
Let's go snow-viewing--
Till we tumble down!
~Basho

choshi
Senior Member

since 2004-01-01

Posts 1184
New York

10 posted 2004-02-13 08:37 AM

Yes...very warm touch with the tea.
Hugs~
  ~ Whatever our souls are made of,
      his and mine are the same. ~

Awww....Thank you, Hugs back.....I really like your signature.  ~P

Now then!
Let's go snow-viewing--
Till we tumble down!
~Basho

choshi
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since 2004-01-01

Posts 1184
New York

11 posted 2004-02-13 08:38 AM

Paul, sounds delicious!!
Hugs
Ethel

Well, let me pour you a cup.....~P

choshi
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since 2004-01-01

Posts 1184
New York

12 posted 2004-02-13 08:43 AM

I love this and would be honored to have a cup of tea with you.

Hugs, Marti

Well, Marti, let me pour you a cup....

~P

Now then!
Let's go snow-viewing--
Till we tumble down!
~Basho

choshi
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since 2004-01-01

Posts 1184
New York

13 posted 2004-02-13 08:44 AM

Very nice! Grover.

Thank you Grover, ~P

choshi
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since 2004-01-01

Posts 1184
New York

14 posted 2004-02-13 08:46 AM

Ice storm's midst;
chimney smoke rising
teapot whistles.

o the water cycle
drip drip drip
frozen toes

Frozen toes,
warming by the fire;
sipping tea.

Now then!
Let's go snow-viewing--
Till we tumble down!
~Basho

choshi
Senior Member

since 2004-01-01

Posts 1184
New York

15 posted 2004-02-13 08:47 AM

I enjoyed this.
Sadie

.....Thank you Sadie, I am glad and also appreciate your detailed comments

~P

Now then!
Let's go snow-viewing--
Till we tumble down!
~Basho

choshi
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since 2004-01-01

Posts 1184
New York

16 posted 2004-02-13 08:49 AM

nice

Thank you Dixie, the depth of your own poems, leaves me very appreciative of your comment...~P

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