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aRiEsAnGeL Member
since 2004-03-04
Posts 53Florida |
I thought you loved me I thought I was your all I thought I was your passion I thought I was your girl I didnt think you would think about her What did I do wrong? I am so upset and mad What am I? just someone you can play with,a toy? I have feelings just like you I am only human I like to know whats going through your head I like to know if whether or not we are ok But,I guess you dont care how I feel and it scares me It scares me because I have committed myself to you I gave you my heart and soul You are my passion,my everything I love you,but then again I hate you You put me through so much I dont know how to deal with it I want us to be together,but then again I dont I want you to be free So that you can what you want to see, be what you want to be and think about what you want to think about You are so close to losing me But,i feel that you dont care You say you are sorry,but I will not forgive you I am fed up with you In order to stay with me and not lose me You have to work on how you see things I love you,but then again I hate you I only hate you because of the way you treat me I thought I was your all and your only love But,I guess I was wrong So its almost time for me to say SO LONG! |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Naomi~ Welcome to passions! I enjoyed this and look forward to all you have to offer! Susan "sit on top of the world and tell me how you feel...'cause what you feel is what I feel for you.." |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
like mother, like daughter  we sure know about the love/hate thing, don't we? I'm so excited to have you here with me! Love you, Mom |
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Deep_Inside Member
since 2002-02-14
Posts 377i can't stop hiding |
Welcome to pip. Your writing seems a bit different from what I normally read… I like it… keep writing! SIDE NOTE: i like seeing both a parent and child the can write poetry. i wish my mom could write. when you live you begin to die |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
welcome, happy to see you here... looking forward to what your pen has to offer...and so far so good!!  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
 WELCOME TO PASSIONS NAOMI! It's great to have you here along with your mom! What a well written first post! Again welcome, enjoy and have fun!! ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
 Enjoyed your first post! HUGS !! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Naomi, just so you know... Enchantress and Nightshade are sisters  They wirte lots of "sister poetry" you may like to read .I know how you love Sierra  |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Naomi~ Like I told you in my email ... WELCOME TO PiP !! You pen your feelings naturally in thoughtful flow~ I'll see more of you ... Honest Injun ! And ... yeppers on the 'sisterly love' ... believe me I KNOW about this~  *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Welcome to Passions in Poetry Naomi. I enjoyed your first post. And I look forward to reading more. believe in what your heart feels... |
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