Teen Poetry #7 |
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Untouchable |
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Jeremy Halstead Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 569Morris, Ill. U.S.A ![]() |
Untouchable Standing so close, I could reach out and press my hand to her body. Yet she somehow alludes my grasp and taunts me unknowingly because she's untouchable. She sees my attraction, but can't look at any heart but his... her unqualifid keeper. I know she wants to peek, but won't. So I'm untouchable. We dance about and dodge eachothers way- it's like our little game. Only no one can win and the pieces move forever when the goal is eachother and were untouchable. Jeremy Halstead Be it in the truest form, or a desperate lack thereof, fail not to understand that the inspiration is love. |
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young_blood Senior Member
since 2003-09-19
Posts 1115Indianapolis, IN |
this was pretty good. you could have gone into much more description and metphors witht this one. it wasn't bad,but wasn't awesome. i guess it was just alright. keep posting stuff though! -alex now im alone, but not lonely like before |
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aRiEsAnGeL Member
since 2004-03-04
Posts 53Florida |
this was very good poem Jeremy |
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