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Teen Poetry #7

make it

Riley

Senior Member

since 2002-07-18

Posts 1038
in the pouring rain

0 posted 2004-03-08 10:12 PM

these tears just keep coming
falling over and over
down the window
i can see it in your eyes
you're hurting
me
yourself
why can't you trust me
you can
i put it out there for you
take it
away from me
i want to feel this
in your arms everything feels right
i'm safe from the lies
from the pain
just hold me
i'll forget everything around me
make the tears stop

i'm sitting in the dark....waiting...
waiting for you to see me.

aRiEsAnGeL
Member

since 2004-03-04

Posts 53
Florida

1 posted 2004-03-09 09:13 PM

i really enjoyed this one.

Lexy
Senior Member

since 2003-01-28

Posts 1038
California

2 posted 2004-03-10 08:00 PM

nice, sad, beautiful

Riley

Senior Member

since 2002-07-18

Posts 1038
in the pouring rain

3 posted 2004-03-10 09:04 PM

angel-thanks...glad you enjoyed

lexy-thanks for your comments, glad you liked it

i'm sitting in the dark....waiting...
waiting for you to see me.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2004-03-11 04:06 AM

I like this too

Riley

Senior Member

since 2002-07-18

Posts 1038
in the pouring rain

5 posted 2004-03-11 10:27 PM

passing shadows-thanks for your comment

i'm sitting in the dark....waiting...
waiting for you to see me.

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