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lilibeelee Member
since 2001-07-12
Posts 143 |
Trying is killing me Everything is so wrong You expect so much I give you so little Trying to be perfect An effort to be what you are No matter how hard I try The effects seem so glim Being told you can't Rather then yes yo can Lets lay it on the table Let my emotions bare Lets annylize my past Lets pick apart my weakness Never focus on the efforts Never see how much I'm worth It tears me apart From the depths of my soul It burns Can I be so perfect? The model that you want You expect perfection Instead its a constant struggle I want to have confidence I want to feel loved I'm treated like a child I don't feel as an equal Love shouldn't be like this I shouldn't have to struggle Struggle to change myself It's never about you It's always something with me I am sorry I'm not like you Infact not even close Your so perfect So flawless You feel sorry for me I am sick of the pitty Why can't it be equal It isn't even close Instead I am just a pitty friend Who you always try to change Everything I do you question Everything I say you doubt When it comes to something I can't stand It doesnt seem to be an issue You think your in the right When indeed your in the wrong You feel sorry for me The fact I have no friends So here comes the pitty I am sick of how he pretends I try and make you understand me The fact is I shouldn't try You should just understand I don't see what is so hard Would it hurt to have compassion? I can't do this anymore I don't feel loved I feel over annylized I feel tired Tired of trying to maintain happiness When inside I feel so weak |
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Strider612 Junior Member
since 2003-12-21
Posts 46Alabama, United States of America |
Wow. That feels a lot like some things I've gone through, and it says a lot of what I feel. Good write for the most part. It has a lot of feeling put into it, and that's one of the main things in poetry. |
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J.Samm Member
since 2004-01-12
Posts 415Iloilo City, Philippines |
very passionate! write on.  |
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