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OtherSideOfTheMirror Member
since 2002-12-19
Posts 245
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So angry i can't think straight All I remember is you took my place I warned that it would happen this way You told me i was crazy You said it'd all be okay You pushed through and then Forgot our initial plan You left me in the dust Remembering yourself alone Left me nothing but your empty trust. Somehow I knew it from the start That it would end and we would part But I didn't realize the hate I would hold for you one day And now that it's mine, I nearly regret The day it started... the day we met. |
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dertah Senior Member
since 2003-06-18
Posts 584 |
good onnnnneeeee. |
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Spine Grinder Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127Standing In Silence... |
Wow..I know that feeling. Good write. "I'm tired of being what you want me to be."~Linkin Park |
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Silent Evincar Member
since 2003-07-22
Posts 179Here There and Places Between |
Hmmmm, sounds alot like clairvoyence.... that feeling in the bottom of your gut when you know exactly what, when, and how. Then there's always something added to it to make it a little more confusing. I enjoyed this and look forward to more. NJS |
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SilentTears Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 371Lost and Broken |
Hmm...yes, I can definitely relate with this one. It's a very controversial feeling. You were so much in love...and didn't think anything could replace that, YET, the pain that was caused by that person...makes you regret the day you met. I can relate whole-heartedly. Nice work. It's going in my library for future reading! *I figured out that trust was just my one mistake...* |
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