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kissa~rachelle Senior Member
since 2003-11-27
Posts 988nowhere special |
She listens to the gossip. About her no doubt. She drifts off into her own little world, not caring or paying attention to the stares, or the whispers. She doesnt care anymore, It is just another day, just another nightmare, just another rumor added to the rumor mill. Her only friend is the darkness. the only place she belongs. The only place that accepts her. the only place she isnt alone. ~Vampire kisses :evil This one is short, but i like it. [This message has been edited by kissa~rachelle (02-20-2004 12:20 AM).] |
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Ixxi Member
since 2004-01-02
Posts 77England |
I really, really enjoyed this. It's really, I dunno, atmospheric in a cool way.  |
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dodge_chick2003 Member
since 2004-01-18
Posts 136California |
Most people wont understand this But I do, I have been there plenty of times. I just hope that you know you arnt alone. If you need someone to talk to I'm here my addy is [email protected]. Keep up the good work. |
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Lexy Senior Member
since 2003-01-28
Posts 1038California |
This is expressed very well. And I know the feeling. needing to hide in the darkness. The only part I would suggest changing is this line: just another rumor added to the rumor mill. Just because it is redundant. maybe change rumor, to a different word, the first time you use it. But I think I'm just nit picking, cause I can't find anything I dislike that much.  |
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