Teen Poetry #7 |
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Echo |
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Allysa![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden ![]() |
Blink/ take a breath/take a small step backward where you wish it all away. where you fall five feet just to remember. to a place where time never existed. It was always just you, and me. Do you remember? Inhale/ close your eyes/close your window shut the world out and leave me in. I want a trap door to your soul. A way to find you when the world is gone. There will always be a place, and time. Think/ small crazy thoughts/small crazy dreams I'm drempt away by you, for you. and you haunt me, you possess me. You share my world with me. It will always be just you, with me. Speak/ let your lips shake/let your voice escape Undo the lock and let everything fly. Unveil the truth and the lies, the feelings. Let everything fall out and spread around. And I will always be your echo. |
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kissa~rachelle Senior Member
since 2003-11-27
Posts 988nowhere special |
Wow. "and I will always be your echo" the ending rocked. ~Vampire Kisses ![]() I want a relationship i can finally sink my teeth into.~ Alexander Sterling |
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blueyedlioness Member
since 2003-04-24
Posts 289USA |
Okay, now *that* is free verse like it's supposed to be. I love it. |
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Ixxi Member
since 2004-01-02
Posts 77England |
Beautiful |
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Allysa![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
Thanks everyone. |
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