Teen Poetry #7 |
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Just being me. |
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kissa~rachelle Senior Member
since 2003-11-27
Posts 988nowhere special |
I sit in my room, feeling so alone. Casted out, cuz i'm not another clone. I tried being the same, as all of the popular ones. I hated being so fake, it drove me insane. I couldnt keep acting, It just wasnt right. I wasnt meant to be cooped up, I'm a creature of the night. Why cant all of them see? I am just being me. ~Vampire kisses ![]() I dont like this one all that much, i thoguht i would post it to get some advice on how to make it better. Oh, and ignore the first two comments. I reposted this. [This message has been edited by kissa~rachelle (02-20-2004 12:27 AM).] |
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Manth88 Junior Member
since 2003-06-15
Posts 45IL, USA |
Wow this is really deep!! But I like alot, you definatly got the point across. Nice write. *^!Manth88!^* |
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kissa~rachelle Senior Member
since 2003-11-27
Posts 988nowhere special |
Thanks. I've been workng a lot on my imagery, and havent really been so worried about rhyming. ~Vampire Kisses ![]() I want a relationship i can finally sink my teeth into.~ Alexander Sterling |
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skyshine![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
Hey, sometimes it takes courage to be what you want and not what everyone else wants. You go girl! Well done! ![]() ~sky Hold on, if you feel like letting go |
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