Teen Poetry #7 |
I want to write a poem |
sixington Member
since 2003-07-14
Posts 53Utah |
I want to write this poem, to show everyone how I feel. but I’ve been hiding that all away for no one to see from everyone, from me. I'm afraid to show what they feel but I know that you don't mind because its all inside and that’s what's me, honestly, and I can't be me without the e, and the e is my free, free to write, and express, and not hide my feel ings from anyone, even me. with the e. So I’m writing this for us, meaning you and me, and her, in the corner, and the guy on the street, too noble to ask for help, and the guy on the street too desperate to refrain from asking for help, because I see the pain in their faces and I wish I could show them the way to be happy, but I don't know it myself, but I try, I try, and I fly with my words, my expression. I have a vision a mission to know myself, and once I do I will have fulfilled everything I need to do, which means I will not need anything more, a knock on death's door, but now I can’t die cuz I haven't learned to cry again, and I’m sure the real me, with the e, would only be, naturally, beautiful, which I am not, or rather, I can't believe I am even when people say I am because seventeen, vogue, everything shows me in airbrushed quality what I wish I could be and I’m not. And when I can be attracted to couples on the street, to people’s moving feet, in vans or sneakers or high heels, when I can show people what they need to do to accept me and those around me who I know are waiting to come out to someone who’s totally cool with their skin color and their orientation and their views on "liberation" and I know I am a minority but that’s okay, because it’s me and I wouldn’t, couldn’t be anything else except maybe you because I know you feel me when I feel alone and you’ve never met me but I saw you perform and you moved me, and so I write poetry about my own sexuality, femininity and I wish I could perform for you, and I can’t imagine how it must feel to be real, because I can’t convince myself I am real, even though, in me you can see the freedoms and greed and selfishness show through in my beautiful flawed homo sapien way, unique of your beautiful, flawed homo sapien way. |
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dertah Senior Member
since 2003-06-18
Posts 584 |
deeply written stuff. you would be definately fit in with me and my friends, seems like you have a unique outlook on society. |
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Sweetest Sorrow X Member
since 2004-01-19
Posts 146From a cradle to a casket |
I dont know why anyone else didnt comment on this post its so good, i really enjoyed it it made me feel what you were saying. I really liked it!' <3 Persephone She would rather be dead than fat, |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
OMG Persephone!!! How ever did you find this from 2003?!? Lol...cool write Amanda, hope you come back to pip soon and read this. ~Alli~ *:.AIM = Alli4000.:* |
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HopelessRomanticGuy Member
since 2001-08-17
Posts 495LI, New York |
quote: Words more true than those above I have seldom heard All art has the power to reach the soul but none greater than written word To all with spitits so enlightened as this: fly free as a bird! -Rich Winamp Is Playing: "The Road I'm On" 3 Doors Down Away From The Sun [center]"I'm burning in the heavens, |
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