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Lindsay
Member

since 2003-03-26

Posts 59
South Dakota

0 posted 2004-11-25 10:25 PM

I feel so helpless
Standing by, watching you suffer
You’ve helped me so much
Why cant I save you
You don’t deserve to feel like this
No one does, no one should feel so much pain
You’ve had to endure so much already
I don’t know how you do it
I don’t know how you make it through the day
Your one of the strongest people I have ever known
But yet, one of the saddest

I don't know much at all, I don't know wrong from right, All I know is that I love you tonight
-Good Charlotte

~DreamChild~
Senior Member

since 2001-04-23

Posts 544
in your dreams

1 posted 2004-11-25 11:15 PM

"to love is to live,
to live is to suffer,
to suffer is to become strong,
to be strong is to survive,
and to survive is to stand in the end."

*Alli4000*

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since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

2 posted 2004-11-26 10:21 PM

Amazing Lindsay...I'm speechless at this poem. Nicely done.

~Alli~

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fearing-laughter
Senior Member

since 2001-04-24

Posts 605
land of cheese (Wisconsin)

3 posted 2004-11-26 10:51 PM

=)

"Be who you want and do what you will, in the end those who matter won't mind, and those who mind won't matter." -Dr Suess- (a brilliant man)

HopelessRomanticGuy
Member

since 2001-08-17

Posts 495
LI, New York

4 posted 2004-11-27 01:52 AM

Yeah, I think we all know someone like that... someone who has it so much worse that we do, yet always takes the time out to help us with our problems. Always trying to bring happiness to others, though their lives may be devoid of it. Still, it hurts to be helpless to help them in return. A truly heartfelt poem. Truly.

-Rich

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[center]"I'm burning in the heavens,
and I'm drowning in a hell.
And my soul is in a coma
and none of my friends can tell,"
[i]~Take Me~ Papa Roca

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