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Riley 
since 2002-07-18
Posts 1038in the pouring rain 
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verse one Bet you’ve been waiting for a girl like me the punk chick watchin mtv who can't make up her mind.... every single time your around yeah right chorus i'm the girl you look right by and please don't pretend you don't cause i'm watchin you out the corner of my eye trying not to but what i feel is beyond my control i'm just sitting here wishing you felt it too verse two so there's everything sitting in front of you it's like you've got it all but there's something in your eyes telling me somethings....wrong hook oohh....and you wouldn't tell me because i can't get to you i've been trying forever there's nothing left that i can do 'cept chorus sit here and watch you out the corner of my eye tryin not to, but i can't help what i do.... what i'm feeling is beyond my control now i'm sitting here wishin you would feel it too hook there's something in me telling me this is real believe me, i'm out of control.....ohhh and i can't help what i feel but you'll never notice because.... chorus i'm the girl you look right by and please don't pretend you don't cause i'm watchin you out the corner of my eye trying not to but i can't make up my mind... (not sure what to think about this....give me your thoughts) i'm sitting in the dark....waiting... waiting for you to see me. |
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WinterWren Senior Member
since 2002-12-01
Posts 1044...Coming to |
I really like this song, it's well put together. Im sure alot of people can relate to it also. The chorus is really good. Great job, I hope to hear it on the radio someday. W.W. |
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Lexy Senior Member
since 2003-01-28
Posts 1038California |
I liked this, it was great. I just wish I could hear how it goes. ~Lex |
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