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Manth88 Junior Member
since 2003-06-15
Posts 45IL, USA |
Going to your house, To tell you how I feel. Am I crazy!!?? Is this for real!? Can I really put myself through this? What will he say?! I dont wanna get rejected!! What if he says I Luv You!! Ya like that is gonna happen! Ha! I am so scared! I'm gonna cry I know I will!! So will I run out because of anger? Or Will I jump up and down because of happiness!! Hmmm... Who Knows!! Should I turn around? Is this a waste of my time? But I need to know!! I really do! Get out of car, Go to door! Anxiety kicks in, no room for nerves! Asks, Is Kenny home? No sorry he is at work! Oh...Ok... heart stops! I will come back later in the week... |
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brezee Member
since 2003-06-02
Posts 140 |
nice write, it's all anxious like...and really err err err!!! ahh! haha yuh suttin like that lol...anyways, i'm glad ur writing again, keep it up! oh and i like the end part the ' I will come back later in the week...' nice job!  ~*brezee*~ |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
How come this only got one reply so far?  I can really relate to this poem, not the ending, but like getting ready to tell a guy you like him and not knowing what he's gonna say or what's gonna happen. Great write, I can't wait to read more from you! ~Alli~ *:.AIM = Alli4000.:* |
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Lindsay Member
since 2003-03-26
Posts 59South Dakota |
i liked it, i think most of us have been there at one point in time. i could relate to it, keep up the good work! |
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