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Allysa
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In an upside-down garden

0 posted 2004-08-22 10:09 PM



She wears her heart on her sleeve
your pin on her jeans
the memories you gave her
they're strewn around somewhere
in the mess you left

Argue about the bands you see
the songs she hears
the words mean nothing
disjointed guitar chords
her song’s not finished, not yet

Mixed emotion life lyrics
heart beat, drum beat
sing to her-
cold lips, curled
you voice quivers with simple words

I wish you could see
I will stay with you
pick up your pieces and
mix them with mine
we will be tattered, but together

Her life, in jumbles,
the world’s in pieces
you’ve gone and
she’s struggling in
emotionally inept quicksand

A promise, a lie
insecurity ridden mistakes
make sure she knows
wherever she stumbles
you will catch her, keep her.

© Copyright 2004 Allysa - All Rights Reserved
kissa~rachelle
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1 posted 2004-08-23 11:25 PM


awww.. this was good, i really liked it. I cant beleive no one has posted b4 me...

I could relate a lot to this, it was an amazing write...

Karissa

I want a relationship i can finally sink my teeth into.~ Alexander Sterling

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2 posted 2004-12-25 06:43 PM


Wow...I really like this! Thanks for posting!

~Alli~

Happy Holidays!

Jezzika
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3 posted 2005-01-12 12:34 PM


WOW!!!! THIS WAS AWESOME.  I loved it..

Jezzika

you know he really wants me

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