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Teen Poetry #7

Craving For You

Spine Grinder
Senior Member

since 2000-10-28

Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...

0 posted 2005-01-11 09:02 PM

So sensual...
Such light caress…
Why do you torment me so?
Two bodies…
Too much tension…
Balancing on the edge…
What’s right and what’s wrong?
Concealed desires…
Closed eyes and open hearts…
Is there a cure for this?
Not afraid but not really sure…
Too many tender memories…
Enraptured by the sight of you…
I can’t look away…

"Cuz I'm broken, when I'm lonesome, and I don't feel right when you're gone away..."~ Seether

"I shut my eyes and hold my cries to myself"~ Taproot

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2005-01-11 10:13 PM

whew...this just teeters on the edge of an MC post....

very nicely done

HopelessRomanticGuy
Member

since 2001-08-17

Posts 495
LI, New York

2 posted 2005-01-11 11:46 PM

Nah, this isn't THAT MC...

What is IS, is a very expressive piece of work. Something to be envied, for sure. Bravo!

"I am a part of the world that I hate/I wish the end would come faster, my world's a distaster," - Crossfade "Starless"

Spine Grinder
Senior Member

since 2000-10-28

Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...

3 posted 2005-01-12 05:06 PM

Thanks lol, sorry if I almost crossed some lines...I'll try not to...lol but thanks.

"Cuz I'm broken, when I'm lonesome, and I don't feel right when you're gone away..."~ Seether

"I shut my eyes and hold my cries to myself"~ Taproot

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