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Leaving it all behind |
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greco Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 85buffalo ny 
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hey i posted this awhile ago and it didnt seem to flow and now after re reading it i hope i made it better thanks Leaving the thing I love Leaving the friends that have been made I can’t explain it all but I have to go Something inside is telling me not to stay What it is I will never know Night after night trying to decide Cant sleep tossing and turning Why does this come up now I hate to decide To leave is devastating To leave is for the better Its time to go just deal with it Moving on the only cure Listening to the past echos I now realize what i have done Knowing now what was wrong |
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Michelle_loves_Mike
since 2003-12-20
Posts 1189Pennsylvania |
Finding the right time to make a move is never easy,,,good write Michelle I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike |
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EverRuss Member
since 2003-12-31
Posts 66Indiana |
Great poem. Cant tell you how many times I have wanted to Run away. Lol mostly just running away to my girlfriend but anyways. I love your open lines. Its my still to have open poetry...nothing can be left unsaid or not described enough If my poems could talk they would mean more than the words |
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dodge_chick2003 Member
since 2004-01-18
Posts 136California |
Hey I moved to California a year ago, I wanted to leave Michigan but now I know that I made the worng choice and now I am moving back there. I hope in the end you made the right choices. |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
I can really relate to this....keep posting!  ~Alli~ Happy Holidays! |
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