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Awakened eyes
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Awakened eyes |
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thinktwice Member
since 2003-12-23
Posts 125United States |
Awakened eyes See all in truth Beauty in little And a little in beauty For this reason The drive grows passively To escape the known world And into the unknown Hiding significant reality Crumbles one's existance To mere limbo, A search for comfort An open mind Contemplates the answers A jealous heart Starves for knowledge The "intelligent people" recite And are classicly trained to answer When true intelligence Is found in a child |
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TheGirlNoOneKnew Member
since 2003-12-04
Posts 92PA, USA |
I thought this was beautiful, I especially liked your play on words in the first few stanzas. Awesome write. <3 |
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young_blood Senior Member
since 2003-09-19
Posts 1115Indianapolis, IN |
well written. it seemed almost short to me, but it worked out fine. good work. |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
This poem definatley made me think twice and I liked the title...thanks for posting!  ~Alli~ Happy Holidays! |
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