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Cinderelly
Member

since 2001-12-31

Posts 189
NM, USA

0 posted 2004-01-30 01:31 AM

Have you been afraid to look people in the eyes because you're afraid that they'll see through you?

I have.

Have you ever lost sleep over why you'll never be good enough?

I have.

Have you ever spent every moment of every day hoping it'll be the last?

I have.

Have you ever looked in the mirror and see nothing but pain reflected?

I have.

+I don't know where to go with this one, any suggestions welcome!+

ESP
Member Elite

since 2000-01-25

Posts 2556
Floating gently on a cloud....

1 posted 2004-01-30 10:20 PM

Hey! This kind of reminded me of poem I wrote a couple of months ago, so I'm going to post it now in here even though Im not a teen anymore lol
Erm as to where to take it? Dunno really, just let the feeling flow, let it go where it's meant to. Yeah I know, that didn't help.
Anyway yeah, the lines you have so far are thumbs up

~Liz~

"Time has told me not to ask for more, one day our ocean will find its shore" ~Nick Drake

Cinderelly
Member

since 2001-12-31

Posts 189
NM, USA

2 posted 2004-01-31 07:39 PM

Thanks for your comment!

Life is a moderately good play w/ a badly written thrid act. - Unknown

kissa~rachelle
Senior Member

since 2003-11-27

Posts 988
nowhere special

3 posted 2004-02-13 07:50 PM

I have too. Everyone of those lines i can relate to. I love this. I am not sure how you can expand on this, but i do know that you should. This is going to turn out fabulous!
~kissa~

**~kissa~**
*I wanna be a little more like me, and a little less like YOU!*~ Linkin Park

WinterWren
Senior Member

since 2002-12-01

Posts 1044
...Coming to

4 posted 2004-02-14 06:04 PM

I really like what you have so far. I can relate to this one really well, as I have done all that.
Really good. I guess I would agree with ESP on how to finish it, just get in the right mood and let it come.
I look forward to seeing the finish of this.

W.W.
We were meant to live for so much more have we lost ourselves?
Maybe redemption has stories to tell maybe forgiveness is right where you fell.

Jeremy Halstead
Senior Member

since 2000-06-01

Posts 569
Morris, Ill. U.S.A

5 posted 2004-02-15 06:10 PM

well, not that many people can look at themselves so objectively write it this clearly...good stuff.

Jeremy

Be it in the truest form, or a desperate lack thereof, fail not to understand that the inspiration is love.

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