Those Butterflies Bleed(song lyrics)

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young_blood
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since 2003-09-19

Posts 1115
Indianapolis, IN

0 posted 2004-02-13 01:39 PM

So this is an emo/punk song that I've written for my band called April's Falling. The styles in my newer songs will be a bit more emo tinged and more about relationships. enjoy.-alex

Those Butterflies Bleed

Watching you for half an hour
Brings me back those chills
From this morning's cold shower.
I cry again without a reason,
I've never needed one,
It's just the rainy season.

So here i am
Lost and alone again,
I never thought the past would keep me in.
And i can't stand
Because of your hand,
It holds me down so i can't be free.

Why does this feel so
Terribly familiar?
Why can't I escape myself?
I'll fall to you tonight
Haunting my mind,
Why can't i accept myself?

So Here I am
Stuck inside again
And i neve want to break away from you.
No i won't stand
By your blo*dy hand,
It bleeds all over and I die again.

Ixxi
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since 2004-01-02

Posts 77
England

1 posted 2004-02-13 02:36 PM

Oooh, emo/punk! Prefer punk really...
I really like the ideas you have here, I don't understand exactly about the "butterflies" part and where that somes into it. I hope it turns out to be a good tune, I really do - although the lyrics do sound a bit like something out of a Linkin Park song!
I find writing music for my band really hard in some ways, but an enjoyable experience nevertheless. You should too. Keep writing buddy! :P

young_blood
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since 2003-09-19

Posts 1115
Indianapolis, IN

2 posted 2004-02-13 02:50 PM

oh no! linkin park lyrics.....ah.....the worst insult ever...thats it I'm done writing...ok, maybe not.

Ixxi
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since 2004-01-02

Posts 77
England

3 posted 2004-02-13 03:13 PM

No no, don't stop writing! It's just the bits like, "Why can't I escape myself?" that sound a bit Linkin Park-ish.

The overall piece is very good. You could make some improvements if you wanted, but i like this one quite a lot.
It would be good to hear the actual music going to it though, since now that Linkin Park has entered the conversation, I can't really imagine these words as lyrics to a Punk tune! Nice job though.

young_blood
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since 2003-09-19

Posts 1115
Indianapolis, IN

4 posted 2004-02-13 03:22 PM

thats why it's more emo than punk. it's not sung rap fast or any thing. it's more drawn out. when we have it recorded, i'll email you the song.

Allysa

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since 1999-11-09

Posts 1952
In an upside-down garden

5 posted 2004-02-14 09:43 PM

I can see definite awesome-song-potential for this.

Lexy
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since 2003-01-28

Posts 1038
California

6 posted 2004-02-14 10:43 PM

I've noticed in all yo*r songs you have a * at one point or another. Is there a signifigance to that at all?
In my opinion I like the fist verse the best. Excellent song lyrics.
~Lex

young_blood
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since 2003-09-19

Posts 1115
Indianapolis, IN

7 posted 2004-02-15 05:24 PM

i have a filter on my computer that doesn't allow me to type certain words. it's really strange.

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