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blackandwhitehorizon Member
since 2003-05-05
Posts 183an akward state of mind |
i was timed writing this and haven't really tried to work on it more yet... The sun of gifts pours rays of birth down to the soil bearing the roots of the grass providing nutrients for the growing calf roaming the wild pasture along the side of the mountain that overlooks the hungry waters of the vast pacific licking the rocky shore. An impatient woman stands in line amonst the hustle of the noisy crowd; All rushing, All complaining, All overfed, All awaiting their burger. |
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Lexy Senior Member
since 2003-01-28
Posts 1038California |
All awaiting their burger. good god, that made me laugh. I enjoyed this. I hate being timed. |
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blackandwhitehorizon Member
since 2003-05-05
Posts 183an akward state of mind |
i'm glad it made you chuckle |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
I like this...very observant. lol. Merry Christmas! ~Alli~ Happy Holidays! |
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