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you are my angel
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you are my angel |
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sweet_lost_palestinian1 Member
since 2004-01-08
Posts 90 |
My love, My hopes, My dreams, My wishes, My great smile is in you, My great heart is with you, MY love, my friend, my best taste of heaven You opened my eyes when they were so empty. You opened my heart when it was locked... You opened my smile when I could I was afraid. You want toknow what you are..Your my life my hope my dreams support me .u make me feel like I am flying in heaven… You wanna know what you are..”: You are my angel. |
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sweet_lost_palestinian1 Member
since 2004-01-08
Posts 90 |
srry for some spelling i was'nt paying atention...thanks peace |
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skyshine 
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
That's so sweet....some people in our lives are so special! I'm glad you found one.  ~sky Hold on, if you feel like letting go |
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Snickers123 Member
since 2004-05-07
Posts 94United States-Iowa |
Hey, I liked it!! nice write ~*.:Leah:.*~ |
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Rommance_Touch Member
since 2004-05-07
Posts 97 |
Really nice simple words, its like a begining of luv story |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
I agree with everyone else, it was cute, short, and to the point...nice job!! ~Alli~ |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I liked the poem... it was pretty much to the point. Like hey- oh i like you...so here's a poem about how much I like you. I dont know know if id call some one my angel...lol, given the circumstances though my GF's name is ANGELa...lol good poem tho! I left my wallet in El Segundo... |
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