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Sweetpoet16m4u04
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since 2002-11-10

Posts 153
Ma, U.S.A

0 posted 2004-01-22 09:28 AM

Goodbye’s

Goodbye’s are always the hardest things to say
You just meet someone new and call him or her a friend
Before you know it they have gone away,
And what used to be the beginning has quickly became the end.

Why are these words so hard to say, you ask?
When only you want to see it last
Nobody wants to see all the tears,
You want this friendship to grow year after year.

This weekend is now winding down
Please do me a favor and don’t frown.
We both know we may never see each other again,
But we also know we don’t want this to end.

So I guess I have to say it now
Although it means so much pain and sorrow
When you know everybody will be gone tomorrow
This sad and meaningful word Goodbye!

WinterWren
Senior Member

since 2002-12-01

Posts 1044
...Coming to

1 posted 2004-01-22 03:43 PM

Wow, I really love this piece. Alot. You put into words what alot of people feel, and you did it well. Very strong poem, I especially love the 3rd stanza.
Thank you for sharing, this is going in my library.

W.W.
We were meant to live for so much more have we lost ourselves?
Maybe redemption has stories to tell maybe forgiveness is right where you fell.

ascending_ecstasy
Member

since 2004-01-21

Posts 102

2 posted 2004-01-22 11:10 PM

yeah pretty good. but the title. "goodbye's" doesn't need an extra apostrophe... i am a grammar natzi, i apologise.

Essential Distress
Junior Member

since 2004-01-22

Posts 33

3 posted 2004-01-22 11:37 PM

yeah nice poem... goodbyes are nasty sometimes.

and lex. ur a punctuation nazi, not a grammer nazi. (note the spelling of nazi)

*shakes head....*

ascending_ecstasy
Member

since 2004-01-21

Posts 102

4 posted 2004-01-22 11:41 PM

i stand corrected.

chicken
Junior Member

since 2003-07-27

Posts 44

5 posted 2004-01-23 12:17 PM

just wanted to add thsi to my library so i have to type something! well done xx

chicken
Junior Member

since 2003-07-27

Posts 44

6 posted 2004-01-23 12:18 PM

well done agen (forgot to actually add it)

frolicking dolphin
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since 2003-02-23

Posts 268
my own special world

7 posted 2004-01-23 02:55 PM

It's so true how hard goodbyes are, I really liked this because of the amount of feeling you put into it and how true it is, nice write

~*~Karen~*~

~You can close your eyes to things that you don’t want to see, but you can’t close your heart to things you don’t want to feel~

Cinderelly
Member

since 2001-12-31

Posts 189
NM, USA

8 posted 2004-01-23 07:08 PM

I loved this! It totally made me think about graduation and all the goodbyes ahead of me . . .

Life is a moderately good play w/ a badly written thrid act. - Unknown

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