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Teen Poetry #7

If Only

Cinderelly
Member

since 2001-12-31

Posts 189
NM, USA

0 posted 2004-01-23 07:06 PM

If only I'd given you half a chance
If only I had stop wishing you were him.
If only he'd want me.
But you'll never be him and he'll never love me.

Waiting and wishing for something that could never be, I lost my Prince Charming along the way.

From now on I'll give others a chance.
I'll stop waiting for him.
I won't sit at home, saying "If Only"

As I write this I just have one last thought,
If only I'd realized this a month ago.

+I wrote this a LONG time ago and just discovered it in a old notebook, it's not finished or very good but I thought I'd post it anyways . . .+

Life is a moderately good play w/ a badly written thrid act. - Unknown

kissa~rachelle
Senior Member

since 2003-11-27

Posts 988
nowhere special

1 posted 2004-01-23 08:59 PM

I like it, it sounds like the start of something beautiful! I cant wait to see the end product!
kissa

**~kissa~**
*I wanna be a little more like me, and a little less like YOU!*~ Linkin Park

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